Matt Bellamy

Hi Cats, congratulations for dipping your toes into the world of poetry for the first time! Firstly, to answer your question "What do you think...should I stick to writing stories ...

Ah yeah, just shows it's not always what you know but who you know, really. I got an office job through an agency. It's only six months contract and not ...

I don't know if it's me but I think although they are addressed differently they are addressed to the same person. Would I be right in thinking that? Yeah, that's ...

Awesome! :D

Hey, I'm back! I like the revisions you've done, particularly the imagery you've added: cloaking myself with the shadows of others. I want to feel the brilliant sunlight. I'm creeping ...

Wow, this is four years old. :P Thank you though, I might revisit this sometime.

Hey! I like that you've added more imagery to this. One thing I would change is "hurry, save the last bit that lingers!" to make it sound a little less...dramatic, ...

Submitted by niccy_v: If You Liked "Twilight" you'll like "Wiked Lovely - Melissa Marr" because: It's about 2 Faeries who stalk this young girl who lives with her friend Seth. ...

I'm impressed with the changes you have made - the rhyming scheme is a lot better now, so it's much easier to read, and a lot tidier, so well done ...

Eimear - You can interpret it any way you want, I actually hadn't intended for that, but it's actually a great interpretation, and perhaps something I can work on reinforcing ...

Edited it slightly. Thanks for the comments, keep them coming!

What I like about this is that I tried to interpret it into something else, and there was more than one thing that I thought it could mean. Your description ...

I like to wade through the unanswered posts and give some responses to lonely poems. :P

Argh, who dragged up this topic? I was absolutely useless! :lol: "Umbrella of my smile" is still a really pretty image.

Nope, it's a reference to The Litten Tree in Northampton, England ;) There must be loads of them.